The Haunting Of Halloween Poem by Dee Daffodil

The Haunting Of Halloween

Rating: 5.0


Whoosh! went the candle
Slam! went the door!
Suddenly I had the feeling
I'd been here before!

This house that I'd been
Beckoned to...
Seemed quite familiar now
Yet I seemed oddly
Out of place
And...

Who were these people
In my space? ? ! !
I felt they did not quite belong
And yet decided...
To get along
Until fate...decided...fate!

I strolled the halls...
Explored the rooms
Discovered dampened catacombs!
I saw the paintings on the wall
The knight in armour...standing tall
I marvelled with renewed delight
When fireplace brought forth fire light
As I entered in the dining hall!

And all the while...
As I walked...
I thought it really is a shock
Just how familiar
This old place seems!
Perhaps I've seen it
In my dreams? !

Through the library I did go
And found such books
That thrilled me so...
So many favorite titles here...
It seemed quite odd!
Then...favorite chair!
I found a diary...scented rose...

I paused for moment...
And reflected... on the fact
That I reflected... NOT...
In hallway mirror!
Just how...could that be so? ?
A tricked I guessed!
In haunted house...
At Halloween...
Just a trick...
It must have been!

I continued up the stairs
Feeling apprehension growing here...
This spooky place gave me the chills
Uncanny really...
How it thrills...

I came upon a bedroom door
I noticed stain upon the floor
My feet wished not to enter in...
To this room...
And yet...
Somehow...I knew I must...
And soooo....
I slowly turned the knob
Door opened slightly...

And within I saw the candle light
I saw the draperies I had chosen
I saw the dresser...still complete
With all my perfumes placed...just so...

I knew now...
That I had to know...
Just why I had been beckoned here!
And sooooo...I entered...
With trepidation...
Toe...by toe...I did go...
Softly padding across the floor
In bare feet? !

Wait! !
I do not want to go! ! !
Where are my shoes? !
I must leave this place!
I panic and then become quite calm
It's as if this is indeed...
The very...very right thing...
To do! !

I enter...
And I see YOU there
Resting easily...in your comfy chair
At first I feel giddy!
Happy at the thought
Of seeing you this one last time...
Before I go!
But then I know!
Ohhhh how I know! !

It all comes flooding back to me
As I see the axe beside the bed...
Our bed...that you and I once shared
Until you tired of my love...
And I became...'a leech' you said!
And on that stormy Halloween
When after row, quite unforeseen
You took that axe and as I slept
You sunk that axe...into my head! !

It all makes sense!
It is quite clear!
I know why I have been brought here!
Before I realize...
A scream escapes my throat
And I in yet a final breath
Scream out your name! !

Sometimes...there can be justice...
Even from that state of death
All those who gathered
Down below...
They now know!
I've told them so!
'Twas you who killed me...
Not some stranger
As you professed! !
'Twas you!

They've called me here to re-unite
To bring me back...
From other side...
It was my wish...
I'd written so!
Perhaps I knew how I would go...
I needed to let them know!

Now every year...'round this time
They all gather down below
In dining hall...
They gather, and hold hands, and...
Call me back from beyond...
That icy cold grave...where I rest...
NOT! ! !

Now you....
You have a story to tell...
You may try to explain...your hell
Though I'm not certain they will listen
To your whine!
They think that
You were...
So distraught
That with revolver...
You forgot...about life...
And ended it all...
Right there in comfy chair! !

That is what they think!
I for one...
Will not correct them!
Will not tell them...
That one who loved ME and...
Missed me soooo...
Took your life! !

You had to go! ! !

It was...
A foregone conclusion! !

Same time next year... my dear? ?


Dee Daffodil (HW) 28 October,2007

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elysabeth Faslund 28 October 2007

This will definitely work for Halloween! ! ! The beginning was like Shirley Jackson's 'Haunting of Hill House'...you were doing what Eleanor did...but, you gave it a twist...GOOD twist! ! ! xxElysabeth

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Chuck Audette 05 November 2007

Just phantastic! The plot just gets deeper and Dee-per! It just ghost to show that you've got a super-natural writer's talent! -chuck

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Zen Bojczuk 01 November 2007

Dee.... really, really, really good. I loved your last year's Halloween poem and I adore this one too. Can't wait until next year. You definitely have a talent for suspense and mystery. Zen PS. How much do you want for the movie rights?

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Diane Violet 01 November 2007

Dee, fabulous haunting tale…scary and gripping from beginning to end. Hugs, Diane

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Barry Van Allen 31 October 2007

Dee, SEE! ... I told you that you were mean! Why else would you do this! Scaring everyone like that! ... well done on Halloween ! : -) B.V.A.

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Ernestine Northover 28 October 2007

Hey Dee, what a monster of a poem. Held my attention all the way through and what a great storyline. Excellent piece of writing, a real spooky tale. Well done indeed. Love and hugs Ernestine XX

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