Happiness is what I wanted to elevate
I wrote it on both sides of my kite
I intended to create
She asked if it would sustain
In the unruly wind
Wind, flat soft unruly, or not-
I could find my hope subside
But what I could notice
Joyfully was my sincere wish,
Intend to make my kite happy,
Rise over and over in the air
Encouragement! ! Muse of love and life! ! Facing the winds! Facing the odds of love and life; Able to overcome. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Lovely poem. Says much about our attitude towards life. Thanks for sharing.
Yes. A give and take policy where an attitude to give more would certainly bring happiness in life. Immense thanks Rajnish for your nice feedback
Encouragement here, definitely sublimely worded. The Happy Kite as a metaphored poetic utterrance Most enjoyed your happy and joyful appearance, Kesav! Thank you so much for sharing this visible event, BTW flying kites I enjoyed much as a kid. A 10 Full Score and much much more! God's Blessings.
Encouragement, yes. Kite flying is the best symbol of a child's obscure innate desire to come up high in life. Thanks Sylvie. Nice words yours
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A great imaginative write with compelling imagery. Flexibility is a great factor to sustain an ascending fly to the sky. Cleverly written.