The Happy Kite Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

The Happy Kite

Rating: 5.0


Happiness is what I wanted to elevate
I wrote it on both sides of my kite
I intended to create

She asked if it would sustain
In the unruly wind

Wind, flat soft unruly, or not-
I could find my hope subside

But what I could notice
Joyfully was my sincere wish,
Intend to make my kite happy,
Rise over and over in the air

Tuesday, January 14, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: compromise,encouragement,family life,happiness,understanding
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 March 2020

A great imaginative write with compelling imagery. Flexibility is a great factor to sustain an ascending fly to the sky. Cleverly written.

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 March 2020

Encouragement! ! Muse of love and life! ! Facing the winds! Facing the odds of love and life; Able to overcome. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rajnish Manga 14 January 2020

Lovely poem. Says much about our attitude towards life. Thanks for sharing.

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Kesav Easwaran 14 January 2020

Yes. A give and take policy where an attitude to give more would certainly bring happiness in life. Immense thanks Rajnish for your nice feedback

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 January 2020

Encouragement here, definitely sublimely worded. The Happy Kite as a metaphored poetic utterrance Most enjoyed your happy and joyful appearance, Kesav! Thank you so much for sharing this visible event, BTW flying kites I enjoyed much as a kid. A 10 Full Score and much much more! God's Blessings.

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Kesav Easwaran 14 January 2020

Encouragement, yes. Kite flying is the best symbol of a child's obscure innate desire to come up high in life. Thanks Sylvie. Nice words yours

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