The Grey Unsure Road Poem by Seán O Muiríosa

The Grey Unsure Road

Rating: 4.5


The metallic beasts drift past,
Tremendously, in a tension breaking moment.
Realisation hits in towards acknowledgement
And all the similarities – of pure driven emotion.
But they rush past quickly,
In a flash that will never be relived.

They bustle along the winding grey roads
Some far more striking than others, such parallels!
Parading their eloquent customised features;
Their proudness is a mere existence
On the grey unsure road.
A struggle – but what a journey.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nimal Dunuhinga 10 June 2006

A good write Sea'n, it's very hard to rely on roads?

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Declan McHenry 13 December 2005

Sean, a grand piece. A poetic version of a road movie. I like it.

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Ivy Christou 28 November 2005

what an ending.. Especially 'their proudness is a mere existence..' it reminds me of life were what ever we do at the end nothing really matters! Well done! HBH

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Amanda Lukas 28 November 2005

So nice to once again read the words of such a poet! Another marvelous work, my dear. Thanks. Amanda

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