The Girl In The Mirror Poem by Lillie Ellis

The Girl In The Mirror

Rating: 4.6


She's the girl in the mirror
The girl in the glass
She is just trying to last
She's the girl in the mirror
The girl in the glass

She's the girl in the mirror
The girl in the glass
She wants to get out
But all she does is put on a pout
She taps on the glass
Hoping someone will pass
She's sick of waiting
And sick of baiting
She's the girl in the mirror
The girl in the glass

She's the girl in the mirror
The girl in the glass
She sits alone
And all she does is moan
She yells for help
But it sounds more of a yelp
She hates her life
And goes for the knife...
She's the girl in the mirror
The girl in the glass

She's the girl in the mirror
The girl in the glass
She believes it's too late
and she doesn't believe in fate
she wants help but doesn't ask
it seems like more of a task
She wants to love
But it seems above
She's the girl in the mirror
The girl in the glass

I'm the girl in the mirror
The girl in the glass
I am just trying to last
I'm the girl in the mirror
The girl in the glass

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emily Oldham 11 May 2009

wow great poem, i can so relate! thanks keep writing Athena *** words will change the world ***

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Barbara Terry 07 May 2009

This descibes a lot of us Lillie. 'Let me out' is the silent scream no one hears from the girl in mirror, the girl in the glass. But we must strive to last though so that maybe one day some one passing by will free the girl in the mirror, the girl in the glass. A wonderful ethereal write and all too often true for some of us. A 10+++++ and thank you for sharing. Love & hugs, Barbara

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Zachary Clark 08 May 2009

Shouting in anger at the passing of lives but none understand what you are feeling inside good write thank you very much.10++++++ Keep your head up.

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Afzal Shauq 02 August 2009

She's the girl in the mirror The girl in the glass She wants to get out But all she does is put on a pout She taps on the glass Hoping someone will pass She's sick of waiting And sick of baiting She's the girl in the mirror The girl in the glass well written and intersting..yes he miror has this effect to show the truth as you expressed here in a professional way and the way you did this poem is heartfelt..well done..

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Lacie Wasserman 11 June 2009

Love what your saying. But you cnat just wait for someone to come help you, you have to go out there and help yourself before anyone will be willing to help you. :) Keep writing.

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~Crystal Midnight~ 07 June 2009

very cool idea... great job. ~CM~

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Elizabeth Resendiz 22 May 2009

really good! i really like it!

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Helen Williams 17 May 2009

Another great piece of work, i also could relate to this one as im sure so many could, keep em comming girl! ! ! !

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