The Girl At The Glass Window. Poem by Cain XXX

The Girl At The Glass Window.



a look, a mere glance
with those beautiful sorrowful eyes.
is my heart thudding?
i see her
pressed against that glass wall.
her lips move
yet i hear no sound.
a desperation
to hear that voice.
i strain
and try to yell out
that plea
for her to come on down
and join me.
her ears prick,
does she hear me?
then she jerks back,
and i see the strings attached.
only a puppet.
how strange.
for a moment,
i could have sworn
she was
Alive.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Wow.. Love the imagination of this poem! Well done; D

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Vaughn Bekker 22 May 2010

good poem dude, nice twist, well done

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Tim Woodhouse 16 October 2008

It makes me think of desperately wanting something only to be disillusioned and disappointed by its artificiality when we understand it better. I think we've all been there, whether in relationships or in pursuit of the material aspects of life.

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Brianne Lindline 09 October 2008

nice i like the ending. Cool little twist.

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Katii Stacy 09 October 2008

Wow, i love this poem

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