The Gentle Breeze Poem by Amitava Sur

The Gentle Breeze

Rating: 5.0


The gentle breeze blows quiet,
Spreading the fragrance the flower swings
Cuckoos coo with the morning light,
Quietly blows the breeze so kind.

Very smoothly the breeze blows over
Spreading peace and delight.

Giving a message to all of us
With an unruffled smile ……
It passes from ear to ear
With a whispering campaign.

“Don’t be idle and sit so tight-
Time is running out.
Spread out and give away-
Whatever is in your means.
Later you may miss the chance
Even if you do wish“

Quietly blows the breeze
Spreading peace and delight.
Reminding and telling us-
Time is running out.

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Amitava (22.02.2014)

Friday, February 21, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: dream
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rahul Sharma 23 February 2014

Natural colorfully Innocent.

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Roseann Shawiak 10 May 2014

A gentle breeze bringing insight into our lives and giving us solace - giving us chances to do whatever we can in life. Encouraging us to take the risk however we can to spread peace and delight while alive.

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Shahzia Batool 27 February 2014

Time is running out of hand, Spread out and give away Whatever is in your means.... how true...a nice poem with the wind playing the lead!

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Geetha Jayakumar 24 February 2014

A Beautiful flow of words...I loved reading each lines.

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Valsa George 24 February 2014

What the wind whispers is so true..... “Don’t be idle and sit so tight Time is running out of hand, Spread out and give away Whatever is in your means. Let us do something that can show up a positive result... I feel a mild breeze wafting past me! !

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Lorraine Colon 23 February 2014

Very nice. The breeze, urging us to do our part in bringing peace and delight wherever we can.

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