The Fuel Of My Soul Poem by Ashley Dias

The Fuel Of My Soul



I put away my phone
Don't want to be disturbed, just want to be alone
I walk to my favorite place
I take my time, I slowly pace


I whistle the tune of my favorite song
Amongst the wonders of nature is where I belong
The sunny sky, the invisible smile
Im going to my favorite place, even if it's only for a while

Im almost there, I cannot wait
To get to the river, where it's always great
I meet a few birds here and there
I see flowers blooming everywhere


Im finally here at my secret place
Oh time oh time, please do not race
Oh beautiful river clear as crystal
Wondrous as you are, you deserve a medal

I lay there all my worries forgotten
The pressure is sucked out of me, I feel myself soften
You are the fuel of my soul
Without you, Im not whole

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Godfrey Morris 18 July 2012

Lovely write Ashley.

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Robin Bennett 18 July 2012

Hi Ashley, I really think you have a nice good strong poem working here. I like the format. The rhyme was good, not overbearing to take away from your words in anyway. I did love the last stanza and I am of the school that believes in a great opening and a strong close! I must say I loved what I read! Can you return the favor and reply to one of mine? I'd appreciate it. It only my second day. Thanks Robin If you want me to look at any others just send me a message. I love to read almost as much as I love to write!

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Ashley Dias

Ashley Dias

Victoria, Seychelles
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