The First Day Of My Holiday Poem by David Harris

The First Day Of My Holiday

Rating: 5.0


Standing looking out at the valley below
with its small tidal bay.
The tall masts lie drunkenly on angles
as their boats are left stranded
after the tide retreated,
back to its roving wanderings.
The calls of the seagulls
bark in the evening air
as the sunset enriches
the surrounding hills in red and gold.
Little birds take their last flights
before dusk and roosting.
A serene scene to greet my eyes
in a laid-back day,
the first day of my holiday.
Away from the clamouring pace
of a life left behind for two weeks.
Just standing and watching for what joys
my life must prepare for
as the evening clouds begin to gather.
Waiting for the hour
when night decides to descend
and bring a quiet close
to the first day of my holiday.

13 September 2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A portrait with a pen.... you take us right there, D. t x

0 0 Reply
Alison Cassidy 05 October 2008

A pretty pastoral piece. Love the drunken masts and the barking seagulls. I hope this was a fitting prelude to a wonderful (and well deserved) holiday. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

0 0 Reply
Lynda Robson 04 October 2008

Sounds like you had a good time, nice piece David, 10 Lynda xx

0 0 Reply
Andrew mark Wilkinson 04 October 2008

Hope you and your loverly wife had a great time David... Andy 10

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
David Harris

David Harris

Bradfield, England
Close
Error Success