The Fifth Loner.. Translation By Yasmeen Hameed Poem by Naseer Ahmed Nasir

The Fifth Loner.. Translation By Yasmeen Hameed

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Beginning in the eyes
dreams end up at soles of feet.
The river is yet without a bridge.
For the earth is to become a path, a route,
centuries, a journey must endure.
Racing with water and wind
time overtakes me
and I, the lone
traveler of earth,
lagging way behind you,
holding close, the
left-overs of life,
from the farthest edge
of my expanse
wait for the universe to shrink.
They clay-lamp's flame
frightens the ghost of night.
The sky-canopy is too small;
the light more abundant than my heart.

But drams have a life, longer than all distances.

In seasons divine,
when stars, like flowers will bloom
and around sun-fire will hover, butterflies,
your moon-face will appear
through branches of eternal dusk.
If you'll have the strength
to endure and wait,
then, with a new arrangement of elements,
I'll come for you ….!

Poem by: Naseer Ahmed Nasir,1994.
Translated from the original Urdu into English by Yasmeen Hameed.
Copyrights (C) All rights reserved.

Monday, October 25, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams,elements,love,universe
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akram Saqib 12 August 2014

In seasons divine, when stars, like flowers will bloom, great poem indeed

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Unwritten Soul 23 June 2012

This is a good poem, i dont know the poem without you translated it, and i think you done it very well even he original (your mother tongue language) may sounds better..but this is good and nice! ! keep it up_Unwritten Soul

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Jesse Tampa 26 October 2010

I like it.

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Jesse Tampa 26 October 2010

I like it.

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Pranab K Chakraborty 26 October 2010

Beautiful a journey through the soul......Love, Light, Beauty left behind.....the fragrance beautifies the readers heart also. Yes, poet NASEER, the superior habitant of earth, it is only possible by a poet like you to write with deep...deepest submission... Beginning in the eyes / dreams end up at soles of feet... Next line is magnificent, enriched with strong metaphor and imagery....THE RIVER IS YET WITHOUT A BRIDGE.....sufficient for me to be ignited. Thank you for sharing. Bon voyage.......and again with the eternal thirst I also shout silently ' I'll come for you................. 10++++ Regards, pranab

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