The Fading Blues Poem by Hudhaifah Siyad

The Fading Blues

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The fun of say blues,
Lights lit in pathways and walls,
That which makes pain go away,
Somewhere dreamt,
Ask me about it.

Through days of submission,
To souls darkened, naturally put,
Dulled and deemed dirty,
Somehow put.
Life's naysay.

Years encouraged by words,
Of wisdom as thought,
Somewhat sensible,
Yes, sworded tripple,

The setting, smile as often,
The prayers try broaden,
But, here now written,
Somewhere sunken,
Words of dead men.

Ruled out in life's roulette,
Games of chance by them all I bet,
Somehow put,
Worried of this mindset,
Of you assuming what I write.

The saddness of say, the fading blues,
Unlit pathways and latenight snooze,
Somewhere away,
Away from troubles and latenight booze.

Friday, April 7, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: depression,hatred,heartbroken,sadness,betrayal,broken future
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 08 November 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Hudhaifah. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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