The End Poem by Kat Edwards

The End

Rating: 4.9


Sadness and pain overflowed your mind.
People said you were sane,
But they couldnt see into your mind,
To find all those dark thoughts.

You had a knife
and where thinking of taking a life.
You thought you wouldnt be missed.
You were wrong. You knew I loved you
and I still do, but you didnt stop the bleeding.

I hope that it was worth all the pain you caused,
Only to escape your own pain,
When you used that knife,
To take your life,
I almost did the same just to be with you.

I hope your happy...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Allen 27 July 2008

I feel your pain through your words.

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ohmigod.......katt....

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MMM...BURN...ouchh! ! this is mucho strong..... i never knew you were this good of a writer, i didnt even know you wrote! ! all these months of knowing you, and seeing you, never knew... love youuu! ! ..mills..

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Frank Cannon 28 July 2008

A brutal reality given wing by a pen filled with the ink of deaths dark stain.

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Tom Balch 28 July 2008

WOW..see, told you, your good 10/10

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Jayson Kennedy 14 August 2009

nice ink kat like them all but i relate more too this 1 u seem to have tha same demons as me it hurts when i wake up but my ink is connected to my soul ur friend jayson

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Laron Green Sr. 06 June 2009

nice job keep it up self discipline

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Aubrey silver 08 February 2009

you are a great poet your poems are simple simplicity it was a treat it self to read them

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Randy Hogan 15 January 2009

sadness can over load our minds with pain..... soulful write 10

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Khaos Dven 08 January 2009

thats def my fave kat.10

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