An Ode To My Father Poem by Kat Edwards

An Ode To My Father

Rating: 5.0




Mustang, Mustang
What is wrong with you?
What can I do? ?
Mustang, Mustang
Don’t you freight?
There is still one man you haven’t met!
Daddy, Daddy
Let me help fix the car!
Then we can jump in and drive so far! !

I miss you!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

kat, the heart jumps out and flips when it reads this sweet poem, dedicated to your father.it is a very wonderful poem..btw.

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Keith Hendrickson 07 January 2009

simply beautiful. i loved it

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I gave it only a ten - bcaz they don't go to 11. I love it.

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Izabela B 05 August 2008

thats cute! I really totally love it because its so sad/cute

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Tom Balch 31 July 2008

Very well done Kat, good poem well writen

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~ Jon London ~ 30 July 2008

What a beautifully penned piece dedicated to a loved one........lovely words that say so much. warmest regards Jon

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