The element of nature
No rain is a woman
nor the distinction of a man
it is the element of nature
so prominent
when it's summer heat
is too hot to hold
so old is the crystal coolness
inside the earth
ah, here comes the birth
of the rain from heaven on earth
so very precious
so worth that sudden birth,
oops, I was wrong
the rain is a woman,
so cool, powerfully, and strong
no rain is a woman, I made a mistake
on that grandest lake
the rain, nature's wonder element
so proudly presented and so prominent
my woman!
© Sylvia Frances Chan - All Rights Reserved
Tuesday 17 August 2021
On Indonesian Independence Day
So well said...cool. powerful, and strong....what brings relief.....Amazing verse, Sylvia.
read and comment on my poem 'Praise the Rain' An Excellent poem of yours Sylvia
I love the personification of rain as a woman, fertile and always a giver...
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What a beauty, dearest Sylvia! The rain lady is truly gorgeous!
The rain, Thank God for such necessity and beauty! .. Powerfully beautiful! .. And the notes too! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A Happy Woman's Face.