Kyle Shield Hamp

! The Dying Moon. - Poem by Kyle Shield Hamp

We'll panic 'neath the dying moon:
Mating in the dirt.
All will know when finally-
God does ease the hurt.

Raptured into heaven all:
Those who earned a piece.
Caked in mud and decadence:
Lost souls pray for a peace.

Comments about ! The Dying Moon. by Kyle Shield Hamp

  • Kelly Kurt Kelly Kurt (7/9/2015 12:44:00 PM)

    I agree, Kim. These have to be randomly selected. So many are, as Michael stated; poorly rated, years old and posted by extinct members. This spot should be given more consideration. A poetry site is supposed to be alive. Giving members and guests access to the best content, by those who wish to actively share their Thoughts. Poetry, like all art forms, is subjective, but that subjectivity (Over 35 votes in this case) deems this effort average at best.
    What a pain it would be to move hundreds of poems to another site.

    Please, PoemHunter, this is the MEMBER poem section, not the used to be a member section. (Report) Reply

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  • Kim Barney (7/9/2015 8:59:00 AM)

    Michael Joseph,
    You are so right.
    But what selection process? I think PH must have their computers just select poems at Random. And remember, PH is based in Paris, so who knows how much English they even understand (notice all the grammatical errors throughout this website) .
    I have had one of my own poems selected (Poetry Heaven) , and yet, according to the website, it has never been 'reviewed'! Figure that out!
    I have been thinking of moving all of my poems to some other site. Maybe that's what Mandolyn... did. Remember Mandolyn...? (Report) Reply

  • Kinyua Karanja Kinyua Karanja (7/9/2015 5:21:00 AM)

    A concise Poem with a great theme and symbolic language. Very nice. (Report) Reply

  • Michael Joseph (7/9/2015 1:29:00 AM)

    Not again! ! Another poorly rated poem, posted 7 years ago by a poet that has been off the site for 3 yrs has been featured.
    What about Valsa, Frank, Sandra, Hasmukh, Bri, Madathil, Tushar, RoseAnn etal?
    These talented, contributing poets deserve to have their well written, insightful, touching works highlighted for members and others to easily access and appreciate,
    Please write to the website director and ask to have the selection process reviewed (Report) Reply

  • Killing Hope (7/11/2008 5:42:00 PM)

    Deep and dark, great small poem, PZ. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 9, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, December 16, 2009

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