The Cry Of The Suicidal Girl Poem by Victoria Hudson

The Cry Of The Suicidal Girl

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As this tear drop falls
No one hears my call
My strange odd call
As this tear drop falls

I plead with death to take me away
Show me my death where I lay
No more do I face today
As I drift away

I slowly sink down deep
As I fall to my knees
Where I once stood I know weep
No more can I sleep

As the tear drop falls
No one hears my call
My strange odd call
As this tear drop falls

To long have I help back
To long I was in black
I can no longer hold back
Before light turns completely black

One to many tears I have shed
One I fear and one I dred
Please strike me down dead
With a crown atop my head

Kill me for all I have done
By now I should be shunned
Let my blood run red
While it is shed

Make my blood run across the floor
Let me breathe no more
Let my body hit the floor
Let me see light no more

Make me bleed and die
So I no longer have to lie
Lie to myself as I lay
Nothing more do I say

As the tear drop falls
No one hears my call
My strange odd call
As this tear drop falls

Listen to suicidal people. You could be the one to save them.

Friday, March 4, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mike Smith 05 May 2016

The final line of the poem is so important. People who have these feelings should not be trivialized or told to 'cheer up'. This is a serious condition. It effects people all over the world every day. I think the best thing to tell a person in this situation perhaps is simply that they are not alone. And to mean it. Depression is a demon all itself, but to have to try to combat it without anyone in your corner to help you, that is when tragedies happen. Meaningful write

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James Mclain 04 March 2016

It's been my experience that folk's whom do they tell no one, until the deed is done. Twenty two thousand do each year, with the deadly gun.. iip

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 March 2016

As the tear drop falls No one hears my call My strange odd call As this tear drop falls.. depressions can destroy us . try to get out of it . there are lot of people who love us and care for us. look at the nature and call the name of God. God bless you. tony

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