The Cry Poem by hamid kareem

The Cry



i cried as i came
for the world i saw
was not the world i crave
the world i saw
was not his promise to me
and that was why i cried

i cried at the sight
the room is livid
the nurses face aged
on my mums face pain
this wasn't his promise to me
and so at my tragedy i cried

the sorrow i saw as much
the suffering unlike rain was pain
people died and non lived on
what a picture this grotesque sight
i cried, oh! i cried
as i wonder what happened to my fabled eden

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The Lost.. 02 January 2010

it's a very nice poem...keep writing :) and thnx for sharing.

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Tanganyika Nelson 19 March 2008

Nothing is promised to you. Every thing happems and look the way it do for a reason. Weather its a lifetime, season, or reason. Think about it.

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Yonela Mali 12 March 2008

now i finally understand why babies cry when they are born all thanx to you. beautiful piece

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Pandora Chaos 11 March 2008

I reall ylike this poem its good. keep writing! ! ! !

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