Morning Poem by hamid kareem

Morning

Rating: 4.5


the blanket of night
as been removed
as the early gleam of rays
like the haze on the mountains of switzerland
pass not too gently by my eyes
snatching my sleep
as the chiming bell continously rang
and the cocks crows
wake the last of sleepers
the gentle wind whisperto me
' the morning has come again'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ojedokun, Adeola 29 February 2008

A beautiful mourning...............

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Michael Smith 26 March 2008

beautiful poem....i felt such a morning like that before too =]

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Tiffanie Lau 27 March 2008

full of hope. beautiful imagery u have there. thanks for sharing!

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Lucille Maher 28 March 2008

i really liked your poem it had such hope that i could feel a new day coming.

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Marieta Maglas 03 September 2009

well written poem, thank you for sharing...................10

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Ana Guerrero 08 March 2009

I really like this one I thought it was cute that may not be what you want to hear but it's a good thing

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silver phoenix 12 August 2008

Ive noticed some of your poems are underrated.I love this,10/10. This one drew my attention. Morning, there are so many memories within it.

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Lacey Unknown 29 April 2008

Nice use of personification. I love the gentle use of words... it has a very quiet feel to it. I like this one a lot! ~Lacey~

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Sabrina Jubahar 16 April 2008

nice one, Hamid.. simple. i like it

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