Life Poem by hamid kareem

Life

Rating: 2.3


what is this life but a place of visit
but knowing we will one day passo'er
and this world our host
has all our desires
but it all depends on our doctrine
and mastering of our dual character
of whatuse is a good abandoned body
and an half breed psyche
that is to continue the journey
on the day it parts company
and step onto a new and eternal life
o! lord do not cut me off from thy fancy
so as not to be short of esentials at my rebirth

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Babbellapati 29 February 2008

ur world view is pretty close to ours, here in india!

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Fathmath Sana 09 April 2009

10 plus many-infinty +++ for you! nice writing!

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Jun Insigne 12 August 2008

Very inspiring poem, , , , , , , , , , , , , , thanks for sharing this one of a kind....

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K. V. Venkataramana 13 April 2008

A lovely poem with an earnest request to God 'not to cut me off from thy fancy...'

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Mitta Xinindlu 27 March 2008

I've noticed that your writing is based on reality and that's very matured. This can only mean that your good.

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Vindy Wasana 29 February 2008

I like this poem very much. You have touched the life in a smooth way. wish you all the best.

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