The Creator Poem by kimber harrison

The Creator

Rating: 5.0


A noise in the distant,
partnered with a light,
brings chills on my arms,
and gives my heart a fright.

A blutterfly whisper,
as it lands on a rose.
A flutter of it's wings,
as it drinks nectar from the flower it chose.

A laugh from a child,
a trill of a sound,
that brings joy to my heart,
and makes the world a place,
where love can be found.

Each day I see these things,
my love surely grows,
not only for the creation,
but for what the Creator,
has let me witness and know.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stephanie Fiddy 28 December 2008

Kimber, you have truly a great talent. I believe God has put you in this world to be a writer and i wish you the best of luck. This poem is wonderful. i give it a 10+++

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Stephanie Fiddy 28 December 2008

Kimber, you have truly a great talent. I believe God has put you in this world to be a writer and i wish you the best of luck. This poem is wonderful. i give it a 10+++

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This is a beautiful poem. Keep on writing.

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Brianna Trombley 06 December 2008

its the little things that go unnoticed that mean the most, another poem of yours i thoroughly enjoyed

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