The Confused Butterfly - Haiku Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

The Confused Butterfly - Haiku

Rating: 5.0

A red butterfly,
landed on the woman's hair
with floral accents.


Copyright 2024, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rebecca Navarre 16 March 2024

You have such a thoughtful and heart touching way of expressing things! ..

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Anil Kumar Panda 08 March 2024

So beautifully inked. Loved it.

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Anjandev Roy 09 March 2024

Excellent haiku.... thanks for sharing....

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Indira Renganathan 10 March 2024

It is generally difficult to spot a butterfly amid a broad bed of flowers as butterflies too have floral designs....pretty haiku....liked

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Bri Edwards 12 March 2024

Rose Marie, I would execute/'get rid of' the comma. What are floral 'accents'? Maybe you meant 'scents'? ? And did the butterfly OR the hair (which one) have accents/scents? Hmm? Let me look at your latest poem. ;) bri

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 07 April 2024

The flower missing! Nice haiku. Enjoyed the poetic thought therein

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Rob Lamberton 23 March 2024

Love is like a butterfly!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 23 March 2024

Pure delight to read! This poem is in my Favorites.

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No wonder if a butterfly lands on the hair of a lady it will have a floral accent because a flower can make it beautiful and not a butterfly. Awesome haiku

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Rebecca Navarre 16 March 2024

Ever so many Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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