The Cloudy Crossroads Xxx: : : Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

The Cloudy Crossroads Xxx: : :

Rating: 5.0


Again this misunderstanding
Again the cloudy crossroads,
What it, has deteriorated
A traffic light?
What happens,
Green does not flicker any more? !
My exciting “golf” is peaceful
In a neutral regime…
(Silently sings something about itself)
I sit lonely and I think:
Why I miss about fragrant jasmins...

25/04/08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Broken Peaces 26 April 2008

You are a very talented lady the suttle little messages in you work keep the mind turning over love as usual Chris 10 x

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 27 April 2008

'Again the cloudy crossroads' profound...........thanks for sharing

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Malini Kadir 28 April 2008

enjoyed the work of yours once again....subtle love divine......

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 06 May 2008

We miss something to get something at the nothing is lost............good poem

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Cecil Hickman 04 May 2008

a very interesting and talented write the things we miss sometimes and then the things we notice each day at a different time, thank you for reading and commenting on my poem, , , blessings..Cecil

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David Desantis 30 April 2008

very nice tsira.... 'the cloudy crossroads' is a very cool phrase you have used

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~ Jon London ~ 29 April 2008

What an amazing piece of poetic brilliance.. loved reading this....sorry but I can only offer you a 10 for this... all the very best Jon

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Dr.subhendu Kar 29 April 2008

obnly reeks of sorrow detoriates the cloudy cross road light when defuses by the vale of traffic jam............................beasutiful poem, i like it,10+, thanks for sharing

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