The Clouds Had Freedom Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

The Clouds Had Freedom

Rating: 5.0


I wish I could enjoy
More with happiness and joy
The precious moments of past
That awaited my attention very fast

But where is the time?
I feel so bad sometimes
I am after funny race
Wealth needs mad chase

I decided to be away
For few days and stay
In nature’s refuge
The real happiness that was refused

Was I not to myself in real sense?
Why was I remaining so tense?
I could find no answer
I felt like having rainy shower

The clouds had freedom
In vast horizon of sky kingdom
What a happy movement at disposal?
I now realized about good proposal

Some moments to be spent isolation
That builds inseparable relation
A close bond that needs no scrutiny
Sincere prayer with blessings from almighty

* clipping from M.A Rathore’s album

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 January 2022

The clouds had freedom In vast horizon of sky kingdom......loved the poetic expression sir. A beautiful poem......top score!

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