The Clock Poem by Jorge Baide

The Clock

Rating: 4.8


That clock was there the day I killed you
It was moving its needles making a strong sound
I can still hear it, it hasn’t stop since that night
It was 9: 43 in the night, it was a peaceful night
Somehow I still remember your last words
I haven’t been able to ignore you since that day
Every second it passes I feel your presence
Like a stupid shadow that whispers me

If am alone sitting in the dark there you are
As a dark reminder of what I have done
When am alone I see the wound you made me
But the most horrible reminder you left me was…
That clock, that same clock that saw me kill you
I can still hear its needles moving harder each time
Driving me towards insanity its still there.

I know I will never be forgiven for what I did to you
But I don’t care all I want is to get that clock to stop
I know what must be done, but then I wonder
Will I be able to do so, the answer is no
Because the fact is I am a murderer and I deserve this
The needles are moving harder by the second
I am now ready to do what must be done in order to escape
Now that I am hanging I am finally at peace until…
The moment comes when the devil meets me and my soul
And takes it to the place were It shall pay my debt to you
Although I regret nothing I still hope you can forgive me,
For making our souls wonder in this dark place… we deserve it.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

The clock witnesses all our deeds both good and bad because every moment is life lived or lost. This is a very provocative perspective.

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we measure time, time measures us and doesn't wait or forgive and let's us live in guilt-definitely a very original idea.a ten from me

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Thank you I will see the poems of anyone that will support me and write them a comment

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