The Bottle Poem by sarah honey

The Bottle

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you see the bottle,
and don't know what to do
you want some,
but you don't know what will happen to you
your mind says go ahead,
one will be fine
but you know what happens when you cross that line
you keep trying to convince yourself that it will be alright
but you know it will take control,
no matter how hard you fight
your will becomes weaker,
and the temptations start to grow
your resentments are winning,
and your victories are low
you convince yourself its ok,
and finally give in
another loss for you, and for the bottle
another win

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Angelica Skye 29 October 2008

This an honest, well written piece, keep writing :)

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Sathyanarayana M V S 28 October 2008

alcohol takes away one's sane thinking and when intoxicated anything he can do. Good poem that should awaken atleast some

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