Thank You Sun For The Full Moon Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Thank You Sun For The Full Moon

Rating: 4.8


He burned himself from dawn to dusk
For what the handsome burned himself
The burning traveler on unicorn of light
For something else not power and pelf,

A journey of beauty that never stops
Throughout the day it changed its dressing
And in the pleasant evening he threw it all
In a soothing ocean for a night recessing,

Sun gave his fire to the ocean for a tide
But left behind in the blue skies
His unicorn of light for a lovely ride
What a scene when this rider flies!

Welcome, welcome, my lovely full moon
Invade the earth with your cavalry of stars,
Attack the earth with weapons of beauty
If for beauty and love earth welcomes wars.

The pleasant summer wind with a guitar
Dancing branches beating drums of leaves
Abundance of beauty and love on the beach
Who is afraid of the lovely thieves?

(Again it's Valsa George's poem 'A Royal Birth' that inspired me to write this poem)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Loke Kok Yee 02 June 2017

The transition from day to night is so colorfully depicted in this lively poem. Thank you sir.

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Jazib Kamalvi 02 June 2017

A wonderfully symbolic write. Thanks

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Akhtar Sahab, i just read Valsa's poem- the royal birth and immediately, i see another poem on moon inspired by the sun and of course, by our dear Valsa's poem that has inspired you to write an instant poem. To quote: Welcome, welcome, my lovely full moon Invade the earth with your cavalry of stars, Attack the earth with weapons of beauty If for beauty and love earth welcomes wars. A hearty welcome to the beautiful Moon! Enjoyed reading your beautiful poem Sir! 10+

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Valsa George 01 June 2017

You are amazing....! From an idea, you can grow a beautiful poem! So glad once again my poem A Royal Birth has given you the inspiration to write this. You are the master of instant writes. A 10

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Rajnish Manga 31 May 2017

Just as a magician mesmerizes his audience with his art, the poet deftly does the same to his readers with his pen by transforming the scenery of the day, with focus on sun, into that of the evening with focus on moon and related adventures. Awesome write. Thank you, Akhtar Jawad Sahab. Sun gave his fire to the ocean for a tide But left behind in the blue skies Welcome, welcome, my lovely full moon Invade the earth with your cavalry of stars,

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