shraddha shraddha the poetess


Tere bin hm kaise jee payeinge..[maaaaa] Poem by shraddha shraddha the poetess


Tere bin hm kaise jee payeinge,,
tere bin kaise muskurayeinge..
tere bin kiske sang khilkhilaayenge..
sawaal hai ye k tere bin jee bhi payeinge? ? ? ?

tujhse hai shaam tujhse hi saweraa...
tujhse juda hai vajood bhi mera..
tujhse bsa hai meri khushiyon ka basera..
tujhse chaha bhi to bs sath tera..
ab tu hi bta tere bin y khushiyaan hm kaise payeinge....
tere bin hm kaise jee payeinge..? ? ?

hr mushkil hr takleef m,, dil n tujko hi pukaara..
jb bhi ghiri mai mushkilon m,, tune hi mujhe sawaara..
tere liye kuchh b kr jaoon mai,, y rishta mujhko jaan s pyaara..

chahe jitni bhi door tu ho jaa..hm tujhe na bhool payeinge..
maa tere liye hi jeete hain..tere liye mar jayeinge......
tere bin ab tu hi bta hm kaise jee payeinge........

agar tu na hogi paas,,,
to teri yadon mei simat jayeinge...
teri khushiyon ki khatir maa,,
hm kuchh bhi kr jayeinge.......
keemat lge meri jaan ki bhi agr..,,
to bhi khuda se tere gam khareed layeinge.....
teri beti bnne ka mauka mile agar,,,
to hr jannat kko chhod aayeinge.........
ab tu hi bta tere bin hm kaise jee payeinge.? ? ?

shraddha.........

Submitted: Wednesday, September 04, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, September 04, 2013

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this poem is again dedicated to my maaaaaa........as i can't live without her..............

Comments about this poem (Tere bin hm kaise jee payeinge..[maaaaa] by shraddha shraddha the poetess )

  • Rookie - 94 Points Aman Arora (9/7/2013 11:53:00 AM)

    Poetry in any language should follow one rule: rhythm. I think you should work in structuring of sentences to maintain that. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 17 Points Shraddha The Poetess (9/5/2013 7:43:00 AM)

    thank u so much sir... keep blessing............ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nirvaan Babbar (9/5/2013 6:19:00 AM)

    once again BRAVO....... pretty good poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 17 Points Shraddha The Poetess (9/4/2013 10:54:00 AM)

    thnx gajanan sir thanx ramesh sir..............and keep blessing...... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,232 Points Ramesh Rai (9/4/2013 9:52:00 AM)

    touched my heart. keep writing without any expectation. future is yours. but remember poetry is devtion which is ever alive. novel story may b outdated but poetry never/ it is also my earnest request not to disturb your study for poetry bcoz this is the time for you to mould your life for a better tomorrow you have to write poetry till the end of life. so always take care. my blessings r always with you. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 29,147 Points Gajanan Mishra (9/4/2013 9:47:00 AM)

    terebin kaise jee paenge, good write, thanks. I like your poems. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 17 Points Shraddha The Poetess (9/4/2013 3:50:00 AM)

    thank u so much bhaiya....... (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,745 Points Rohit Sapra (9/4/2013 3:45:00 AM)

    This poem clearly describes your ever lasting love for your mom. Nice Poem. (Report) Reply

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