Last Night Poem by shraddha shraddha the poetess

Last Night

Rating: 2.7


it was a beautiful night
when i was looking into the sky...
what a wonderful sight..!

while walking in my street,
i felt stars were giving me a treat!
they were twinkling on a beat,
a beat of my each and every feat...

i don't know what,
but suddenly that dropped tear
showed me...- my own fear...

a fear because of that noise
that whistling, that horrible voice..
my heart started running fast
and breathes were going stopped....
all the situations were going unedicuate..
then i told myself that now i can't tolerate..1

now stars seems to me, telling me to fight
that beautiful night of mine suddenly changed,,
in horrible night.....
i experianced my fear last night...

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
this poem of mine just expressa fear, a fear of a girl in this society...what problems we face in this society, it describe it totally....!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shraddha The Poetess 03 September 2013

i thank u all for giving time to my poem.............

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Atul Rajput 04 September 2013

BEAUTIFUL COMPOSITION....

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Shraddha The Poetess 04 September 2013

thnx bhaiya...............

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Neela Nath Das 04 September 2013

Beautiful Shr....So nice!

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Alookh (matin) 10 September 2013

nice poem! ...and i enjoyed! :)

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sachin khanna 16 February 2018

wow soo lovle linee soo cute

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Jasbir Chatterjee 20 February 2014

You do write well, Shraddha...You just need to be a bit more coherent, that's all...

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 22 September 2013

I understand the plight of a woman at night, its just so sad that this happens in a modern society like we now have. This is a beautiful poem, expressive and true.

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Geetha Jayakumar 17 September 2013

Beautiful write on today's situation..Yes, girl or women should be cautious at night...Loved the you wrote.

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Apurva Agnihotri 11 September 2013

nicely pointed out! ! .. gud one! ! ! ...

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