*tanka 9: Train Whistle Poem by Lillian Susan Thomas

Such an interesting linking of elements - the train become meteor in the night.

i agree with Mark, this is so deep....for what is life but that train... for we never really know where we are going....

all I know of where it falls - in uncertainty certainty; in the unkowable the knowable. I like this notion of life as the known unknown; and you get my 10, with this first comment, Lilian. brief and deep