Taking The Risk. Poem by Fay Slimm

Taking The Risk.

Rating: 5.0


And the day now came

When the risk it took

To remain in bud

Was giving more pain

Than the chosen chance

Now her brave heart took

To blossom again.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Obinna Eruchie 01 September 2009

What a way take a risk in this one, and it paid off beautifully.

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Lady Grace 23 August 2009

taking the risk is sometimes called suicide..nicely penned

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Carol Gall 18 August 2009

it is a hard thing to do take a risk 10

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Catrina Heart 18 August 2009

now she became a lovely butterfly...........10

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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