Taken Away Poem by Carrie Sprouse

Taken Away



everything seemed to have been taken away
in the blink of an eye
i could have stopped it
but i was too shy

brown eyes of fear
death and perception
it all seemed so clear
but further away than it might have appeared

all will soon be forgotten
nothing left but fears
only what i hold inside
will bring me to tears

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Silence Dogood 12 October 2008

Not bad I like it but it could be improved

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Ron Flowers 24 July 2008

A sad, but lovely poem. Ron

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