Take My Pic Poem by Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide

Take My Pic



Out on the 16th of Sept,
for days look-out I've kept,
for the first shirley poppy flower.

Its four red-pink petals
are white-tipped
and at their bases
is formed a white-tipped black cross
that is largely hidden
by bushy black, yellow-pollen-bearing anthers
surrounding a projecting,
pale yellow, clockface-like pistil
below which will swell the poppy's capsule.

I got to it before the bees,
to perfect it
miming 'cheese'.

Take My Pic
Sunday, September 15, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: flower,perfection,photograph,spring
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 18 November 2019

i suppose you MEAN the insides of the petals! i don't suppose the " cross" bears a mini-jesus? bad joke? ? Hmm? but, SIR, i think you submitted the wrong corner of your 'cheese-miming' photo. : ( aim your camera at my bedroom window and you can get a good shot of a full moon. :) bri :)

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Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide
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