Sweethearts Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Sweethearts

Rating: 5.0


Let me call you sweetheart he
sang, whole heartedly to her. As
he'd take her by the hand, bow,
and round and round she would
dance. Up on her toes and down,
and then into his arms she'd collapse.
As they'd look into each others eyes,
so starry like and mesmerized. Then,
he'd start out again, let me call you
sweetheart, as she'd blush and say,
she loves him.

Sweethearts
Wednesday, January 12, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: life,time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LeeAnn Azzopardi 12 January 2022

a lovely romantic gesture that brought me to tears

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Cowboy Ron Williams 12 January 2022

Very nice love poem, Rebecca!

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Aarzoo Mehek 13 January 2022

Love is a beautiful emotion and your words justified it. Lovely poem.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 January 2022

A sweet poem.......appreciated. Top score

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Anjandev Roy 14 January 2022

Delightful work.....thank u....

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Susan Williams 23 January 2022

beautifully romantic, my sweet friend--I hope life treats your heart gently and kindly--we need your heart occupying the chests of more people in our country--God bless you and keep you, Rebecca--5 stars

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Sylvia Frances Chan 22 January 2022

I am very happy to have read this gorgeous poem of you. God's Blessings, dear Becca!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 22 January 2022

Your poem presents all things a loved heart can desire, and this couple is truly in love, dancing on sweetest tune.Your descriptions are perfectly composed.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 22 January 2022

Most beautiful poem, I can see instantly these are Sweethearts. Such a heart touching poem, my dear Becca. this must get 5 Stars fullest on TOP!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 22 January 2022

My dear Becca, I am happy to be able to read this well captured poem I came across this morning, I dunno what happened to my poem site that I seldom see my poet friends, perhaps another problem again.

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