Sweet Temptation Poem by Rouren Torres
Sweet Temptation
Kiss me,
I dare you.
Hold me,
I ask you.
Caress me,
I plead to you.
Touch me,
I beg of you.
Because I yearn.
Because I thirst.
Because I burn.
Because there is no eye,
It will stay between you and I.
Though God won't forgive you,
I will.
Because a sin is well shared,
If it is ours to bear.
sweet temptation, very good one, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.
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5/3/2024 9:56:49 PM # 1.0.0.1119
I plea to you. ..... maybe i plead you or i beg you or my plea to you, but i don't think I plea to you. and..............tbere is no eye, ..........please take more time to proofread before submitting. i've liked both poems i've read, but it is distracting when i find typos etc. i like this poem so much, i shall send it to MyPoemList. It will stay between you and I.............i'm sure some others would write it this way, but i believe (since you and I comes after between) between you and I should be written between you and me. of course you could be using 'poetic license' to cheat a bit and get the eye/I? what do others think? i especially enjoyed the lines: Because tbere is no eye, It will stay between you and I. Though God won't forgive you, I will. Because a sin is well shared, If it is ours to bare..................................very nice!