Sweet Dream Dear God Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Sweet Dream Dear God

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Night has come, Life has come,
In this tired mood still we feel,
We zeal to have dreams of joy,
Sweetness attracts ever in love,
Greatness is within creation,
Illusion sparks
But we are not worried at all,
Grasshopper sings,
But we listen carefully to cloud,
Light does blink,
We feel soul's movement in trance,
Passing through this
Dark sky mumbles to motivate many,
Swinging flyover swings in hope,
This bridge is the way to heaven,
At this dark night this shines,
Twinkle stars bloom in real realm.

Resting in mind we find new vision,
Goodnight dear God, good night,
You have a sweet dream for paradise,
Give us a dream of sweetness,
A dream of wisdom,
A dream of love,
A dream of peace,
Wonderful dream you give with night,
Let us sleep and wake up in trance,
We are eternal dazzling stars in Earth,
Through this bridge of bed we proceed.
We swing in light and wind,
We bind mind in trust and hope,
In deep darkness we find right path.

Good night God, you have a sweet dream,
Forgive us fro mistakes and give grace,
We promise to obey you at each moment.
We are sleeping now to wake up early,
From deepness of darkness
To deepness of light,
We are having a pleasant journey.
You cover your blanket of love,
To give warmness of wisdom,
In this cold weather of summer,
We are sleeping to wake up soon.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,09 April 2018. All rights reserved.

Sweet Dream Dear God
Monday, April 9, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: dream,god,light,night,wisdom
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Cover photo © Kumarmani Mahakul,15 April 2016. All rights reserved.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 09 April 2018

Let us sleep and wake up in trance, We are eternal dazzling stars in Earth, Through this bridge of bed we proceed.- trance, love, and poetry- amazing.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 April 2018

Light does blink! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Susan Williams 09 April 2018

What a lovely poem, Kumarmani! ! ! Love the imagination that created God giving us sweet dreams of peace. Such a lovely thought to go to bed thinking... 10+++++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 April 2018

What a comforting and heartwarming write ! A beautifully crafted and well executed ardent prayer and devotion. It gives us hope, inspiration, motivation and wisdom in life. Exceptional write. 10

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Dr Antony Theodore 09 April 2018

We feel soul's movement in trance, Passing through this Dark sky mumbles to motivate many, Swinging flyover swings in hope, ...a dream of love, a dream of peace, . very nice dear poet Kumaramani...... you are a real spiritual and noble writer.. thank u again. tony

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Rebecca Navarre 23 April 2018

Beautifully Powerful! ! ! ! ! Beautifully Moving! ! ! ! ! Beautifully Feeling! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Rus Mer 10 April 2018

Give us a dream of sweetness, A dream of wisdom, A dream of love, A dream of peace, Wonderful dream you give with night, Let us sleep and wake up in trance, We are eternal dazzling stars in Earth.... enchanting lines with enchanting hopes...10

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Perdita Young 10 April 2018

Beautiful poem about the falling of peaceful night, when we have good reason to rest ourselves after the toils of day.So many sparkling lines, I just quote a few: Dark sky mumbles to motivate many, Swinging flyover swings in hope, This bridge is the way to heaven, At this dark night this shines, Twinkle stars bloom in real realm.

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Mihaela Pirjol 10 April 2018

Another profound and spiritual poem of yours, which embalms with feelings of light, hope, and joy; that we may all live in the present moment and enjoy the splendour of Nature, especially now in Spring, when everything is filled with verdant life and birds' music. A great poem of Spring!

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Valsa George 09 April 2018

Give us a dream of sweetness, A dream of wisdom, A dream of love, A dream of peace, A beautiful supplication to God! He is the very embodiment of love and wisdom. From him alone comes wisdom, love and all sweetness!

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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