Susan Poem by M.J. Lemon

Hahhahahahahahahahahaha. This was humorous yes but you know what? It carried a clever message about writing as well! ! ! Letting it stew is something I should do more- -every time I post a poem I see a fault, a better word I could have used, a clumsiness of form... if I had waited for the piece to stew, I would have posted a better work. Sigh. [P.S. I'm b- a-c- k! ! ! ! I can now for the first time in weeks go to other people's pages and read their work and write comments about it : P ]

Simply beautiful I hope Susan enjoyed it

It is a beautiful humourous poem nicely depicted. Enjoyed the delectable stew, thanks for sharing.

Your poetry, like so many others on this site, is making me hungry for more. So I read more. And sometimes, I get the urge to write a tribute poem. Another one worthy of 10, M.J.! Keep them coming!

cooking reminds ME of food. i mean REAL food. but i just ate, so i'll finish writing this comment. i too have been inspired to write poems when writing a comment to someone's poem. WAIT! i hear an alarm going off somewhere. i'm gettin' out of here! bri :)

'how much prose, how many poems, I've let stew to the point that the literary fire alarm has sounded, ' loved this and the repitition of sounded, I feel the same way sometimes, stewing cooking in thoughts not expressed, poems crystal clear in the mind, but too tired to get up and write out; I'm cooking stewing in creative juices and I loved this poem.