Superstition Poem by Sandra Martyres

Superstition

Rating: 5.0


She wears a blackened face
With her head lowered
A clear sign of disgrace
For in her home she has no place

Her swollen red eyes
She does look worldly wise
But remains penniless
And is virtually homeless

Who could she be
Abandoned by her family
She is yesterday's young bride
Remember her groom died

She is the unfortunate victim
Of a very deep superstition
That widows only bring ill luck
A reputation with which she is stuck

No villager will support her
She will be treated like a leper
Her fate was after all pre-decided
On this public opinion is undivided

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 27 February 2010

a very hurting superstition...india is full of it

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Mamta Agarwal 08 February 2010

you have brought out the sad plight of women in India in a simple style, with empathy, suppressed anger and helplessness. Mamta

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Ian Bowen 08 February 2010

Sandra, pleased to have learned something from your well written poem. Regards, Ian

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Terence George Craddock 08 February 2010

a well encapsulated poem written true to the genre and telling a tragic tale with simplicity

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