Sunbeams (A Haiku) Poem by Sandra Martyres

Sunbeams (A Haiku)

Rating: 5.0


A blanket of snow
Covers the river valley
Sunbeams dance on it

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ejaz Khan 25 June 2009

Dancing sunbeams on snow covering, a beautiful description!

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a lovely haiku sandra...a picture in the last line...superb

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Priyanka Bhowmick 25 June 2009

wow lovely scene of nature.. amazing haiku! !

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Fay Slimm 25 June 2009

Was with this scene immediately Sandra - - a great haiku..... thanks 10 + ++ Fay

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Nikunj Sharma 25 June 2009

sunbeams on the snow froze the motes did u know......... short and sweet...can only say WOW

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Patti Masterman 18 September 2009

Tiny bit of magic in daily living; always to be treasure. Wonderfully captured by your poet's lense..(smile)

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Duh Huh 09 July 2009

This is so beautiful. I love the short and sweet feel of a haiku. This one conveys a lot of imagery. Very well done and thank you for sharing :)

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Sandra Fowler 07 July 2009

Sun and snow a magical combination. You make me feel nostalgic. Very lovely. Ten for you. Warm regards, Sandra

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Sameer Ahmed 06 July 2009

A picturesque image portrayed wit simple words confining to the scenical nature of the poetess. Nature is and infinite sphere of which the centre is everywhere and you have actually centralized the readers attention by a vista deified in the haiku.

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Yelena M. 03 July 2009

You create Perfect haikus that reflect the moments of beauty in nature. Keep on! Thanks for sharing. A.

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