Sunshines Poem by rinki nandy

Sunshines

Rating: 5.0


Where are you taking me tonight? ,
don't want to go there tonight,
mercilessly you wet me those neverending rains,
hopelessly i miss your fast trains,
fearlessly i fight your mighty storms,
baselessly you show how my future forms,
am tired and drained,
suffocated and strained,
let me sleep please,
go away please,
far away please,
know you visions mirror my mind there,
show my future lies where,
why am i disturbed then? ,
why do you not show me when,
i cry and ask for mercy in vain,
your silence is killing my brain,
was i wasted to give you a thought? ,
was it my sleep that you bought? ,
i go tell them what you did,
how you left me alone and got rid,
i don't cry or buy,
your excuses and lies,
your mysteries haunt me and my hope dies,
desert my mind and bless my eyes,
to never see you again or hear your cries,
go away please dream while my life defines,
my fears......and sunshines.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amrit Rathi 29 May 2010

A stunning piece of poetry with soaked with all the sentiments, uncertainties, resolutions and finally defining the dream with sunshine. I loved it! Voted 10/10. Thanks.

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Somber drab poem…beautiful expression…painfully your type …lolol 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK PS Volleys of questions…and worth… n

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