Suicide Poem by Demon Elwin

Suicide

Rating: 5.0


What brings me to my last breath,
Whats going to be my choice to end it all,
Depression and Lies,
Broken into pieces too many times,
Haha this is my last goodbye,
Do I get to hear you say You love me one more time,
Or will I die before I even wake,
Silent thoughts about this up coming ending,
Can anyone stop me from doing it,
I think not,
No love for me and no one cares for me,
Go on and pull the trigger,
Drink the cyinide,
Hanging by my throat by this rope,
I deserve to die,
Tell me that I'm worthy to live,
I'll scream at you that I'm not,
Fear my death as I might,
But thats just a story in my life,
I laugh as I pull the trigger,
BANG....I'm dead now...,
Too late for me,
Goodbye.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 January 2010

What brings me to my last breath, Whats going to be my choice to end it all, Depression and Lies, Broken into pieces too many times, Haha this is my last goodbye, ...defeatist tendancies ofhuman beings....it is not to be the last choice....lovely and soul searching........10 read mine...humble submission....go back...pulled fromdeepsleep

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Catrina Heart 17 January 2009

A strong poignant composition written in different grace with a stunning flow of words... Poetically penned in free verse form, with such great energy...10... A fowl in a black shawl...pls read.thx

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