Bloodstained Poem by Demon Elwin

Bloodstained



Bloodstained
By, Demon Uchiha

bloodstained,
hands on the,
body of the dead,
there is no way,
for redemption,
from the Lord,
that she once,
believed in,
the blood is still there,
on her innoccent hands,
that were stained so young,
with the blood of the dead,
her blood on her hands,
her mothers blood on her hands,
her fathers blood on her hands,
her brothers blood on her hands,
her innoccent little hands,
stained with so much blood,
the blood is all she has,
to remember all of her sin,
the ones she caused,
and the ones others caused,
the blood is there,
the blood is all she has,
the blood is her,
blood makes her live,
she lives for the blood,
she walks the night,
the creature of the night,
she is the undead,
she is an immortal,
she is a vampire.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jessica Burral 23 December 2008

I really liked you work on this poem. I like the poems I read like this to make me feel like I'm kind of in what I'm reading and it did that. Very well written.

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