Suddenly Poem by Kasia Fedyk

Suddenly

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In the desert sun I lay
kissing the ground
oceans became
and quenched my thirst.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 24 May 2012

God, does change the world at times

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Gajanan Mishra 13 June 2012

Beautiful! Yours Gajanan Mishra

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Hans Vr 25 May 2012

Makes me think of the story of the river that crossed the desert by allowing itself to be carried by the soft and loving winds that carried it before it became a river. Lovely write

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pleasure of submission breathes on my forehead

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Dave Walker 24 May 2012

Short and beautiful, a fantastic poem, may I invite you to read my new poem called, Let Her Be Free,

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Saadat Tahir 24 May 2012

sudden fortune...like lottery ticket matching up...windfall thrilling and exhilarating.... some times life changing... well conceived...well written :)

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