Sudden Death Poem by Deepak Amembal

Sudden Death

Rating: 5.0


Eyes waltzed
To favorite smiles
Seen adjusting
The misty mask
With life’s comfort
Suddenly bereft
A vision gone
Without a song.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Herbert Nehrlich1 16 February 2005

Sorry but my first thought was 'crafty little devil'. And my second one was 'he sure is'. Good stuff. H

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Christine Magee 16 February 2005

I love the opening line. This is excellent, Deepak. Chrissie

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