Success After Falls Poem by Varun Silva
Success After Falls
Resilience
Real Strength
Slackness
Closes paths.
Success
After turbulance
Sweetest;
That close to
Heart makes
World look
Beautiful.
The sun melted
Mist of
Gloomy past,
Present shines.
Patience with
Tolerance
Powerful soldier
Swishes past hurdles,
Splashes happiness:
Gives heart
Top o' world feel.
O, Winner!
My heart showers
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16.11.2014
chennai
Thanks for this wonderful poem where each word shines as a diamond studded in an exquisite piece of jewellery. Your choice of words is superb leading to the perfect expressions. All the best, Varun.
Super composition, I think you will be the winner definitely. CONGRATS, your new poem speaks many more things starting from real strength to success and patience with tolerance with heart full movements. Falling down is not a matter on riding a horse or climbing a mountain. Definitely this poem delivers nice message for society Varun Silva. Excellent one. Keep on writing.
The unchanging change of change is inevitable. I like the articulation of the poem and the poet's conviction. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
Days are not same every tide has a fall, all crest has a trough nice one
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The sun melted Mist of Gloomy past, Present shines. A very good poem I enjoyed reading it. Well done 10/10 Col Muhammad Khalid Khan