louis rams

Freshman - 797 Points (09/13/1943 / new york city)

*****************stupidity***************1978 - Poem by louis rams

i was feeling pretty low.
everything went wrong, no matter
which way i'd go.
i felt really down and out
and i had an argument with my spouse.

she could never seem to tell me
when something seems to go wrong.
she starts to scream and holler
and i feel i don't belong.

it seems that she goes through the agonies
and i through the ecstacies.
but yet it seems that it was
a love meant to be.

this is what i call 'stupidity'.


Comments about *****************stupidity***************1978 by louis rams

  • Rookie - 165 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (1/11/2010 9:45:00 AM)

    Ha ha ha climax lies in finish…better to be stupid in this way many many times…
    10
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK

    PS Mature Romantic Stupidity…LOL! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Scott Daniels (10/2/2009 5:01:00 PM)

    Very interesting poem. I didn't see the end coming. A nice tongue in cheek poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shashendra Amalshan (9/19/2009 10:50:00 PM)

    Hey this is a different one..
    I found this one rather amusing.. enjoyed reading your good oldies! ! !
    title is very interesting too huh! ! 1

    cheers
    shan (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (9/19/2009 9:19:00 PM)

    some relationships do start...continue and end that way...... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (9/19/2009 11:20:00 AM)

    poignant poem written and expressed so well..........thanks......... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 19, 2009



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