Stupid Me Stupid You (Wow Its Bad) Poem by Nyl Revol

Stupid Me Stupid You (Wow Its Bad)



Lying on the cold cement
Red surrounding me
Spots in front of my eyes
I think
About what we did
And the cards you read
'Fool.'
'Death.'
'Devil.'
Fool for beleive
Death for acheiving
Hell for knowing you.
How much I kept from you
That I now wish I told
Now that I only have a few,
I will tell what I cannot hold.
You made me sad
You made me cry
You made me hurt
And now, you are making me die.
Myseterious
Furious
Depressed
So I repressed.
You hurt me
And now I must die
And in my last moments
I admit, I lie.
I love you.
Goodbye.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sydne Morris 05 November 2009

Wow. I love your rhyme scheme and just how you used repeating of vowels and constantants to express the pain in you. Awesome Job! ! ! !

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Infamous Ashley 05 November 2009

it was really good i was a little confused but im getting as i read it over and over and i really liked it

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