Struck By Lightning (Fibonacci Sequence) Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

Struck By Lightning (Fibonacci Sequence)

Rating: 5.0


sudden
sharp
sapphire eyes
struck by lightning
blood electrified resurrects the heart
from induced coma comes back red in love

the flesh is warm against the volcanic crater
once carbonised by love's fire
terra cotta static
tacit emotional
fire
survives

Wednesday, November 21, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: emotions,encounters,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 21 November 2018

Great revival of love! I understand that a spark is about to grow into a conflagration of love! Great write Mihaela!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 November 2018

the flesh is warm against the volcanic crater once carbonised by love's fire terra cotta static tacit emotional fire survives....so touching and impressive. A beautiful poem poem so nicely executed.10

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M Asim Nehal 21 November 2018

Superb! ! ! I am happy after being struck by the lightning he/she finally survived.....And I liked the format (Fibonacci Sequence) Full marks.

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