Storm In A Tea Cup Poem by narayana aghalaya

Storm In A Tea Cup

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STORM IN A TEACUP

Brewing teacup's storm
escalating, explosive.
Then, love's soothing balm
renders storm placid and calm.
Why the storm, who remembers?

Saturday, March 31, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: family
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
sometimes, storms happen. high pitched exchanges. and then after some time love returns and miraculously everything is forgotten!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 03 October 2018

A short poem but highly expressive dear poet! Loved reading it......10

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Valsa George 02 April 2018

How often this storm in a tea cup happens in families! But soon calm returns and love is reinstated! Beautiful Tanka!

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Narayana Aghalaya 03 April 2018

Thank you, Valsa George!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 01 April 2018

Narayana, such a moving tanka👍👍👍

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Nudershada Cabanes 31 March 2018

A beautiful tanka that captures the storm in a teacup. Storms come once in a while in the gamily and in all relationships but love always overcome them and everything is forgotten. Well penned.10

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narayana aghalaya 31 March 2018

Thank you, Nudershada Cabanes!

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Naila Rais 31 March 2018

Its reality....👍👍 Nice write.... I would like you read my poems and express your views.... Naila

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narayana aghalaya 31 March 2018

Thank you. Will read your poems too!

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