Still Poem by Tom Allport

Still

Rating: 5.0


A Christ'mas present
Can only ever be
The present of Christ'mas
When it STILL celebrates
The birth of thee.

Friday, December 29, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: birth
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lyn Paul 17 January 2018

Great words presented along with a strong reminder. Thank You

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 January 2018

Celebrating the birth of thee is definitely very interesting. Christmas celebration brings hope and joy within us. Stillness of celebration we memories through presents received during festive session. An excellent poem is very well penned...10

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Yiyan Han 05 January 2018

Some regimes even ban Christmas But can't stop people celebrating...

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Mihaela Pirjol 04 January 2018

I like the brevity and the truthfulness of your poem. Unfortunately, the consumerism of our society we are living in, has become a psychological burden.

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Susan Williams 30 December 2017

The truth beautifully and humbly expressed- - you used exactly the right amount of words- -which is a huge talent that should never be over-looked! ! ! ! 10++++++++++++++

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