Autumn Winds

Rookie (July 22 1993 / Sanfrancisco, California)

Stars and Faults


There's a fault in our stars
It's always been that way
To love and lost
To have never been loved yet
Still have lost
Even light treads
Leave some kind of mark
There's a fault in our stars
It's always been that way
Crossed from our hearts
Crossed still today
And the stars implode
And the stars explode
And our footprints are in the sand
Until they're washed away
There's a fault in our stars
It's not our fault
But it's here to stay
There's a fault in our stars
It's always been that way

Submitted: Wednesday, May 15, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, May 15, 2013

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  • Rookie - 416 Points Shahzia Batool (5/21/2013 11:15:00 PM)

    Stars and faults... a new version of the old debate of Fate and Free-will...nicely done! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 485 Points Paul Brookes (5/15/2013 2:16:00 AM)

    Ah those star crossed lovers Are we always star crossed. I like the metaphor Good write Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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