St Kabeer's Couplets 4: Why Poverty In Speech? Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

St Kabeer's Couplets 4: Why Poverty In Speech?

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Speak such soft soothing words, no crude,
Words that help lose self pride for good,
Words that keep you in cool mood,
Make others as well feel good.
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Hereunder is given the original doha, a couplet by Kabeer, which when rendered in English takes all of four lines, a quatrain or more:

Aisee vani boliye, mun ka aapa khoye
Apna tan sheetal kare, auran ko sukh hoye

In Sanskrit they say: vachane kā daridratā |
What use being so miserly in words? Utter sweet words, let others feel fine,
And as bonus, you too maintain cozy cool.

Topic: words, poverty

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Muhammad Ali 19 January 2020

Words or tongue is very important for the place we are or will be, in the society. ... Misunderstanding or there are conditions or habits when tongue is irrespective of a processing mind, otherwise this advice one should practice. Very nice.

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Aniruddha Pathak 19 January 2020

Thanks for your keen comments dear poet.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 January 2020

So very true. Words.are sometimes the foundation of good relationships and unity. An insightful write Another superb quatrain.

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Aniruddha Pathak 16 January 2020

Thanks indeed, but it seems there are not many takers of wisdom. 'We have here more poets than readers', someone had told me, and seems true. But I'll continue for a while. To translate St Kabeer in no more than four to five lines is a challenge and I'll take it. Besides, I want to put Kabeer to larger audience outside India.

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Aniruddha Pathak

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Godhra - Gujarat
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